"Poetry is a deal of joy and pain and wonder, with a dash of the dictionary." ~Kahlil Gibran

Thursday, April 14, 2011

IN GOLDEN GATE PARK THAT DAY ... By Lawrence Ferlinghetti

At first impression the poem seemed to be an illustration of an idyllic scene, a tranquil day spent together by "the man and his wife". However the unexpected ending changed the reader's previous perspective. I had to read the poem again with a different viewpoint and I realized how the images dramatically changed their meaning. The impact was a woeful one. It's a sad ending displaying a dark revelation. There are several patters throughout the poem. Some lines are repeating: "which was the meadow of the world" appears twice and through the usage of that line the speaker changes the common place to a universal one. The line "without looking at each other" appears several times and suggests an emotional gap between the man and his wife, which is emphasized by the line "without saying anything". When the wife finally looks at her husband she had "a certain awful look of terrible depression". The last line of the poem leaves the reader inconsolable. At some level it seems to me that the poem represents the reality of most marriages. At first glance, most marriages seem submerged into normalcy but subtle details (such as the repetition of some suggestive lines) are present to disclosed that they are in fact sinking.

6 comments:

  1. I love your point of marriages and relationships at first glance. So very true, I don't know how many times Ive been shocked over this or that couple having a break up or a divorce. Very insightful point about this poem.

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  2. I also had to read the poem again, because the second time around, you start to look for the clues that Ferlinghetti gives to show how they're sinking and possessing an emotional gap. I agree with how the poem represents the true nature of marriages. I feel like this shows us Ferlinghetti's side on relationships/marriages.

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  3. I am not sure if it's Ferlinghetti's view of marriage. I think he illustrates beautifully through his poetics a realistic fact of life.

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  4. I disagree.
    I don't think that their marriage was in trouble at all. I actually feel like they were so connected, emotional and spiritually that she could feel him up until the very end which is why she was overcome with depression

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  5. Yes, though like many of Ferlnghetti's peoms, this goes somewhat beyond the literal, immediate context, the question of human, individual relationships (though that's important), to an existential question/epiphany.. wee my comments on Constanza Rehren's and Diana Arutyunyan's blogs in previous classes

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  6. I also agree that there was not a reltionshiip gap, i think they where so connected they didnt have to look at each other to understand how eachother was feeling. Ferlinghettis is tryen to show how some married people live and interact and i think that they way he is expressing this is not that abnormal

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